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(10) Her poetry is wonderful to read. (11) Concrete imagery was used by her to illustrate abstract concepts, such as love and death. (12) Her unusual use of capitalization and punctuation and her use of irregular meter and rhyme make her poetry unique. Which is the BEST way to rewrite Sentence (11)?

A) She used concrete imagery to illustrate abstract concepts, such as love and death.
B) To illustrate such abstract concepts as love and death, concrete imagery was used by her.
C) Such abstract concepts as love and death were illustrated by her use of concrete imagery.
D) Concrete imagery was what she used to illustrate abstract concepts, such as love and death.
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A) She used concrete imagery to illustrate abstract concepts, such as love and death.

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A, because it flows the most. there are no splices or breaks in the flow
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