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Can someone proof read my paragraph please. Getting ready for work: I wake up at 6:30am take a shower and brush my teeth. I then get dressed, comb my hair and apply make up and other hygiene products.
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Can someone proof read my paragraph please.

Getting ready for work:
I wake up at 6:30am take a shower and brush my teeth. I then get dressed, comb my hair and apply make up and other hygiene products. After that I eat breakfast and gather everything I need for the day. I proceed to make my bed and wash my dishes. Last but not least I I head out the door get in my car and drive to work.

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After 6:30 A.M., put a comma.... as well as after shower,  after hair, after least, and after door.
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shouldn't there be a comma between 6:30 and take a shower?

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