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I really need help plzz. Can you help me rewrite part of this poem?

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

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They were all happy and in a trance
Feeling free and wanted to dance
Sparkly stars in the night being free as they take flight
Hope this helped in some way
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Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
i felt the need to scream in pleasure,
scream in delight without measure.
of course this sacred beauty lies,
underneath the starry skies.

User Seanrco
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