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Read the paragraph.

(1) Have you ever wanted to make your own album or podcast? (2) Join the Avondale Middle School Digital Recording Club! (3) Come to our recording studio after school in the afternoon and get right on the mic. (4) We’re looking for singers, comedians, and anyone who wants to learn some fun new skills!



Which sentence contains a redundancy?



A. Sentence 1

B. Sentence 2

C. Sentence 3

D. Sentence 4

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Answer: sentence 3. or C.

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The answer is: [C]: "Sentence 3" .
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Note: The following is "Sentence 3" :
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"Come to our recording studio after school in the afternoon and get right on the mic."
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refer to: "after school in the afternoon" ; which is redundant; since: "after school"; is inherently in the afternoon, so the phrase "in the afternoon" is redundant—and unnecessary.
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