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Which revision corrects the punctuation errors in this complex sentence with two dependent clauses?

We picked these apples, when we went upstate which was on Tuesday.

Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.”
Leave the comma after “apples” and add a comma after “upstate.”
Remove the comma after “apples” and do not add any other commas.
Remove the comma after “apples” and add a comma after “was.”

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Answer:

Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.”

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Answer:

The first answer

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