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Rewrite the following paragraph using action verbs and power nouns. I went to my mailbox. I was waiting for something to come in the mail. I opened the mailbox. I looked inside. I saw an envelope. It had my name on it. I took it out. I opened it. I saw a letter addressed to me. It said, “Dear Ms. Clip, We are pleased to tell you that you’ve won our contest. Please contact us for your prize. Sincerely, Things for School.” I was excited and went inside to call.

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I was waiting for something in the mail box.opening the mailbox I looked inside.i saw an envelope with my name written on it.took it out and opened it.a letter addressed to me..it said'dear mrs.clip,we are pleased to tell you that you've won our contest.Please contact us for your prize.sincerely ,things for school.'i was excited and went inside to call.
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