Question

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly? Bridget said, "This is my cousin Brian." Shannon exclaimed, "I am so glad to meet you! Did you come all the way from Ireland?" "Yes, I did," said Brian. "He visits us every summer," Bridget volunteered. A. correctly B. incorrectly

Answer 1

It's all correct, the only thing is after each character is done with his/her line, insert a line break. 

Answer 2

It is incorrect, B. Just took the test. Hope this helps :)