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Buddy Rich has appeared in Hollywood films

Symphony of Swing (1939)
Ship Ahoy (1942)
Louis Armstrong
How’s About It (1943)


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You did not put the date of Louis Armstrong, and it has no "these" in between in, and Hollywood.
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