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I need someone to add the rhyme the 3rd and 4th line so it rhymes. The pattern of rhyming going in a A,A in the first-line and second line last word. and B,B for the ending of dissipate and done for 4th line and 5th. Change the whole thing only if you can use the same idea in a different rhyming scheme.

Plowing through the states
I ruined many people's fates
All is gone my work is done
And soon I dissipate

User Mklbtz
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Plowing through the states
I ruined many people's fates
All is gone, my work is over
And soon I will gain closure
User Mauro Dias
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You could make a sentence ending in bun, gun, fun, or other things
User Gaurav Dhama
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