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Which is the strongest revision of the following sentence?

When editing your essay, make sure that each sentence is concise, is written clearly, and all the grammar is correct.
A) When editing your essay, make sure that each sentence is concise, clear, and grammatically correct.
B) When editing your essay, make sure that each sentence is concise, is written clearly, and all the grammar is correct.
C) Having correct grammar, being concise, and being clear are what you make sure is present in each sentence of your essay.
D) When you edit your essay, you need to make sure that each sentence is written concisely, is clear, and has correct grammar.

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The answer is A I took the test.


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I think the answer is A
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