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Is this grammatically correct?

The organization of the “Fear of Happiness” presents the theme of coming of age; this connection displays the development of the speakers fears of having happiness.

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The organization of “Fear of Happiness” presents the theme of coming of age; this connection displays the development of the speakers' fears of having happiness.
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yes, it is correctof course
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