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Which choice best describes the sentence and explains how to improve it? Took crayons and made beautiful, homemade get-well cards for the children in the hospital. This sentence is complete and correct. It does not need any revision. This is a comma splice. Add a conjunction after the comma and before the word homemade. This is a fragment without a predicate. Add a verb to show what the subject is doing. This is a fragment without a subject. Add to the beginning to show who was doing the action.

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fragment without subject. Add to the beginning to show who was doing the action.
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Answer:

This is a fragment without a subject. Add to the beginning to show who was doing the action.

Step-by-step explanation:

This construction is a fragment because it resembles a sentence in the sense that it begins with a capital letter and ends with a punctuation mark, but in reality, is not a sentence because it does not express a complete thought. The fragment is missing a subject, the doer of the action. So, in order to correct this fragment, you should add who “took crayons and made beautiful, homemade get-well cards for the children in the hospital.”

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