Question

Which of these sentences would BEST add vivid words to the script of a video presentation?

A) The rock-strewn path—which leads to a cool brook—is lined with sweet-smelling flowers.
B) The rocky trail—which leads to a brook—is lined with a lot of nice-smelling flowers.
C) The other path—which leads to a stream—is lined with a number of nice flowers.
D) The old trail—which leads to a cool brook—has some nice flowers on its sides.

Answer 1

A) The rock-strewn path—which leads to a cool brook—is lined with sweet-smelling flowers. A is not the one.

Answer 2

In my honest opinion, i'd go with A