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s the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly? "Are you sure this is the way to the park?" Mrs. Bean wondered aloud. "No, this doesn't look familiar," said Mr. Ting, who was driving. "I'm sorry, but I think I missed a turn, Mrs. Bean." "Oh no," Mrs. Bean said. "I hope we won't be late." A. incorrectly B. correctly

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This passage was written incorrectly.
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its A incorrect in the sentence "No, this doesn't look familiar," there are two commas in the dialogue there are only aloud to be one.
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