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Which revision corrects the dangling modifier in this sentence? Strolling on the boardwalk, the whale suddenly breached.

1 Strolling on the boardwalk, the whale was breaching.
2 The whale was suddenly breaching, strolling on the boardwalk.
3 The whale suddenly breached strolling on the boardwalk.
4 While we were strolling on the boardwalk, the whale suddenly breached.

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the 4th one :) i hope that this helped
User Percusse
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the fourth revision is correct. it says who was strolling in the sidewalk.
User Kit Barnes
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