Question

Which is the BEST revision for this sentence:

One thing that makes the Peachtree Road Race special is that it takes place each year on Independence Day.

A) Flags are waved down Peachtree street and nearly everywhere colors are seen.

B) Peachtree street has waving flags and nearly everywhere red, white, and blue is seen.

C) Spectators and merchants wave flags down Peachtree street, and participants see red, white and blue nearly everywhere.

D) American flags are waved by spectators down Peachtree street, and nearly everywhere red, white and blue is seen by the runners.

Answer 1

Answer: C) Spectators and merchants wave flags down Peachtree street, and participants see red, white and blue is seen by the runners

Explanation: Which is the best revision of sentence (1) in paragraph (2)?

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Answer 2

D) American flags are waved by spectators down Peachtree street, and nearly everywhere red, white and blue is seen by the runners.