Question

I had to write a poem for English. Does this sound good?

"Love. Love is the butterflies in your tummy when he says something funny.

Love is the burn in your heart when you two are apart.

Love is thinking about him in the middle of gym.

Hate. Hate is how seeing him with another girl makes you want to hurl.

Hate is your heart bleeding and the butterflies leaving.

Hate is your eyes starting to blur, because you should be her.

Love. Love is learning to live without him..."

Answer 1

... That... was AMAZING!!!

Everything really flowed, and the poem itself was really touching! It's definitely something others will be able to relate to I'm sure.

Keep up the great work!