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Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?

User John Tyree
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well to make a good avertisment you have to sell it. buy that i mean make i candy make your logo pop, interesting to look at, modern, but also simple. Make sure you use correct grammer, and also make it seem like if you don't have you are not worth anything


User Dameon
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Have music that is popular
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