I need help editing a small paragraph.

asked Sep 11, 2018 232k views

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by Ryber

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Answer:

This excerpt needs to be edited for

Step-by-step explanation:

I just got it right...

Yi Jiang answered Sep 13, 2018

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Hi! I can help. Feel free to message me.

Rhayene answered Sep 18, 2018

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