Question

I really thought she loved me but I discovered her grave betrayal one afternoon. It was easy to figure out because she accidentally sent a text to me that was meant for him. I was confused by the text because it said, "Don't tell Mike." I felt insulted that she thought she could get away with this infidelity. At first I felt very angry bitter and hateful but then, I felt so hopeless and depressed. I longed for her to call me. I thought if I could just hear her pleasing voice, maybe then I would not be filled with such bitterness. Instead of calling her I talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain. Talking with her makes me feel euphoric. I think I may be on the road to recovery.

Which punctuation correction would improve the following sentence?
A. Insert comma after "first"

B. remove the period off "depressed" & insert comma

C. insert commas after "angry", Bitter & "hateful"

D. insert comma after ''then"

Answer 1

I think that A, C, and D, are all correct answers. They could all improve this passage.
Hope this helps!
{~Oh Ms.Believer}