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Here's my full draft for english, I need some feed back plz

Here's my full draft for english, I need some feed back plz-example-1
Here's my full draft for english, I need some feed back plz-example-1
Here's my full draft for english, I need some feed back plz-example-2

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I think it is good and gives full details and good evidence GOOD JOB!

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