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Because the endangered panthers living in the forests need large, connected territories to roam.

What is the best review of this excerpt?

A) The excerpt does not need revision because it contains an independent clause that completes the writer’s thought.

B) The excerpt does not need revision because it contains a dependent clause that completes the writer’s thought.

C) The excerpt should be revised because it contains an independent clause that leaves the writer’s thought unfinished.

D) The excerpt should be revised because it contains a dependent clause that leaves the writer’s thought unfinished

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Answer : Option D) The excerpt should be revised because it contains a dependent clause that leaves the writer's thought unfinished.

Explanation : As per the excerpt of endangered panthers which are living in the forests require large and connected territories to roam around freely. This lines from the writer's point of view seems to be unfinished. More information should be provided or it should be revised again.


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