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Highlight the vague word or phrase in the thesis statement below.

Colleges should not look at your gender or race before making a decision.

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gender or race because there should be a your before race
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The "vague" word or phrase in the thesis statement below would be "decision" because it does not describe what kind of decision. Hope this helps!
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