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Read the sentence. Culture plays a major role in Boston, and theater, music, and the visual arts are well represented. Which revision best corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence? Culture—including theater, music, and the visual arts—plays a major role in Boston. Culture, which is well represented in Boston, plays a major role including theater, music, and the visual arts. Theater, music, and the visual arts are well represented in Boston culture, and they play a major role. Theater, music, and the visual arts play a major role in Boston’s culture, and they are well represented.

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B maybe the correct answer, only because the last choice has a comma at the end and not a period. (but if you just made a typo while copying and its supposed to be a period, then that's the answer.)
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