Question

HELPPPPPP I NEEED HELP, Aquarius, the Water Carrier The paragraph below tells about a special date in January history. Can you find and mark ten errors in the paragraph? You might look for errors of capitalization, punctuation, spelling, or grammar.

If your birthday falls between January 20 and February 19, your astrological sign is Aquarius, the water carrier. The story of Aquarius come from greek mythology. It comes from the tail of Ganymede, a young boy who was kidnap by Zeus, the leader of the gods as the boy cared for his sheep. Ganymede was made the servant to the gods it is said that Zeus like the boy so much that the constellation Aquarius were created in his honor. there are 10 errors

Answer 1

The Water Carrier should be capitalised, it should say the story comes from not come from. I’m pretty sure Greek mythology should be capitalised. It’s the tale of Ganymede, not the tail. The young boy was kidnapped, not kidnap. Gods with a capital G, and then there should be a comma after “the Leader of the Gods”. Then, you have to put a full stop after “Ganymede was made the servant to the Gods” and a capital letter on the “It” that comes after. After that, it should say the constellation was created in his honour, not were.