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The kite, which was supposed to be easy to fly, crashed again and again, and everyone got hot, tired, and grumpy.

Which comma should be replaced with a semicolon to avoid confusion?

User Idris
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Take out and ad put a semicolon
User Zsyesenko
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I think the semicolon would go after the last again (crashed again and again; and everyone) This is because both sides of the semicolon are complete thoughts.
User Stefan Steinegger
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