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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence?

Fierce peregrine falcons competed to capture Harvey, the woman's pet parakeet, who had escaped from his cage.

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change the woman's pet parakeet, who had escaped from his cage to the woman's pet parakeet who had escaped from his cage


change Harvey, the woman's pet parakeet to Harvey the woman's pet parakeet


change Fierce peregrine falcons competed to capture to Fierce peregrine falcons competed, to capture


make no change

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I think the scentence is right
User Dickfala
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make no change. The sentence is correct.

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