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I kinda don't like how this poem sounds. Is there anything I should change?

Fear is a powerful thing
It can change your life
Fear can be big
Fear can be small
But no matter how big your fear is
It is Fear all in all.
What are you afraid of?
What causes you to bristle in fear
Tell me, what are the things that scare you?
What causes your hair to stand
Fear is a powerful thing

User Ushox
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Maybe take out "It can change your life"
Instead include how fear runs through your mind anxiously to not be a fear anymore.


User Vladimir Muzhilov
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