Question

Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard english. it was a fine day. a nice breeze was blowing. birds were making a noise in the tree. flowers grew by the grass.

Answer 1

It was a beautiful morning.  A kind breeze blew throughout the warm air. Birds chirped and sang their harmonies from the tall oaks nearby. Lovely lilies sprang from the ground.

Answer 2

A way to re-write this sentences with vivid adjectivies and avoiding slang would be:

It was a beautiful evening. A pleasant breeze was rustling. Birds were chirping gracefully from the branches of an old tree. Colorful flowers of all types were blossoming in the soft grass.