Register
Matt Sorum was playing with The Cult, and he was recruited by Slash of Guns and Roses, so he played with Guns and Roses, but he has since returned to The Cult. What is wrong with the sentence?
118k views
5 votes
Matt Sorum was playing with The Cult, and he was recruited by Slash of Guns and Roses, so he played with Guns and Roses, but he has since returned to The Cult. What is wrong with the sentence?

User Perseus
by
7.9k points

1 Answer

1 vote
What is wrong with the given sentence above is the overuse of conjunctions to make it into one sentence. This common sentence error is called a run-on sentence. The thought of the whole sentence becomes chaotic because of too many ideas that are forced to be put into one. Hope this answers your question.
User Nellius
by
7.1k points
← Prev Question Next Question →

Related questions

Ask a Question
Welcome to QAmmunity.org, where you can ask questions and receive answers from other members of our community.

9.4m questions

12.2m answers

Other Questions

Passe para a voz passiva: - Kevin asked Dennis a question -Somebody Build the house last year -She gives him a box
Who is the author of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland'??
why is mercury usually hard to see without a telescope?
If you are writing a persuasive essay in favor of banning vending machines in schools, which is a counterargument you might anticipate?
Transforme em voz passiva: They don't speak English in this shop
Link Copied!