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Can you help me read over this short paragraph and help fixed any grammar mistake? Or you can paraphrase some line to make it sounds more good.

My favorite subject in school is science because I love learning about chemical property changing which is really interesting. In school, I also love drama since I love acting. And last, I love watching anime because anime are cute.

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My favorite subject in school would be science, because I love to learn about interesting things, like chemical properties. I also love drama, because I love to act. Lastly, I love to watch anime because I think it's cute.

hope i helped :)
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