Question

13 You and some other students recently organised a fashion show at your school to raise money for

a charity
Write an email to your friend about the fashion show,
In your email, you should:
say what kind of charity you raised money for
explain what you did to help to organise the show
describe what happened at the show.
The pictures above may give you some ideas, and you can also use some ideas of your own
Your email should be between 100 and 150 words long.
You will receive up to 6 marks for the content of your email, and up to 6 marks for the language
used.​

Answer 1

Dear friend,

I hope you are doing great. I am well and happy since I have helped in a fashion show at my school to raise money for a charity, and it went excellent.

With other students, we organized a fashion show to raise money for the Save Children charity. It is an organization that helps children in need to be healthy, to have food and education. I was part of the food team, which means that I had to cook and sell food to our guests. The response to the show was overwhelming. Thanks to the organization and the hard work, we raised more money than we expected. Even more, the principal congratulated us on our job!

I have to go now, but I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

See you,

Jane.

Step-by-step explanation:

When writing a letter to a friend, we have to use an informal style.

In the first paragraph, we have to write about how we are, ask how the other person is, and introduce the letter's topic. In the second paragraph, we describe the fashion show in detail. In other words, we write about the charity, our role in the show, and what happened. Lastly, we write our final paragraph to say our goodbyes and ask the person for a response.