Question

Thesis Statement Help

Thesis: The creation of the United States secret endeavor, called the Manhattan Project, not only served as a major technological breakthrough in harnessing nuclear power but also halted the Axis powers from winning World War II.

Do I need to revise my thesis statement and add in more stuff or is it good as is.

Answer 1

A thesis should cover, briefly, what key points you're going to be addressing in the rest of your essay. If you're going to have about two body paragraphs, each discussing (separately) how the U.S. secret endeavor harnessed nuclear power, and how the endeavor halted the Axis Powers, then this thesis statement is great. If you plan on discussing any other major key points that are separate from those, make sure to include them in the thesis. Hope this helped!