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The following sentence might appear (although we hope not) as a safety instruction poster in a laboratory. Rewrite it, using proper General 1.

In the event of a conflagration too intense to be immediately extinguished, occupants of this locale are instructed to progress toward the most adjacent means of egress.

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I don't know what proper General 1 is, but I'd rewrite this as:

"In the event of a fire that cannot be extinguished immediately, please leave through the nearest exit"
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