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Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.

Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.

Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.

This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management

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he is correct. 100% i just did the test. like on god.,

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I would have to say the last option
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