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How could you correctly combine the first three sentences of the passage below to add variety? Check all that apply.

I saw Amir. I was visiting New York. He lives there. We went to an Italian restaurant and ate big plates of spaghetti. It was a fun outing.

I saw Amir, who lives in New York, when I was visiting.
When I was visiting New York, I saw Amir, who lives there.
When I was visiting New York; I saw Amir, who lives there.
I saw Amir when I was visiting New York, which is where he lives.
I saw Amir, when I was visiting New York, that is where he lives.

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Answer:

I saw Amir, who lives in New York, when I was visiting.

When I was visiting New York, I saw Amir, who lives there.

I saw Amir when I was visiting New York, which is where he lives.

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The options that combine in a correct way the first three sentences of the passage are:

  • When I was visiting New York, I saw Amir, who lives there.
  • I saw Amir when I was visiting New York, which is where he lives.
  • I saw Amir, who lives in New York, when I was visiting.

The first of these sentences adds variety to the passage and correctly combines the three sentences by building the sentence with a subordinate clause ("When I was visiting New York"), an independent clause ("I saw Amir") and a non-defining relative clause ("who lives there"). The second and third sentences also include these three types of clauses (a subordinate clause, an independent clause and a relative clause). Moreover, in the three sentences, the subordinate clause is introduced by the subordinating conjunction "when".

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