Question

Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence?

While walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, the weather was miserable.

While I was walking almost a mile to school, the weather was miserable, with wet, heavy snow.

Almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, while I was walking to school, the weather was miserable.

While walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable.

The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.

Answer 1

its the second one just took the test!!!!!!

Answer 2

It would be the second choice. It has no dangling modifiers. It lets you know exactly who/what the sentence is meaning to talk about; it has a clear subject.