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Read this excerpt from a student's essay and answer the question below.

"Having a brother with autism can be really stressful. You never know how he's going to react. It takes a lot of patience sometimes. You love him but sometimes he drives you crazy."

How could this student revise to improve the reflective writing in this sample? A. The student could eliminate several unnecessary words. B. The student could share a story that illustrates emotions. C. The student could emphasize the good things about his brother. D. The student could repair several spelling and punctuation errors.

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B. The student could share a story that illustrates emotions.
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