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Does my thesis statement sound okay?

In William Blake’s poem entitled Auguries of Innocence, an impactful usage of theme, diction, and structure is used to attain that in every seemingly insignificant display of injustice lies a reverberation of horror from the cosmos itself.

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In my opinion, I would take out entitled and put quotation marks around the book title or italicize it.
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