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Read the excerpts.

Excerpt from the rough draft of a school newsletter

Students are requested to bring empty soda cans and old newspapers to the school recycling center. Recycling used and unwanted items is one way to help our planet. Students can also work at the recycling center on Saturdays.

Revised excerpt

Students are encouraged to bring empty soda cans and old newspapers to the school recycling center. Recycling used and unwanted items is a great way to help our planet. Students can also help at the recycling center on Saturdays.


How does the word choice in the revised paragraph support the author's purpose?
A.
The paragraph is more persuasive to the reader.
B.
The paragraph is more judgmental of the reader.
C.
The paragraph is less encouraging to the reader.
D.
The paragraph is less understandable to the reader.

2 Answers

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The answer is A. The revised excerpt is more appealing and persuasive than the original excerpt. Some of the work choices such as changing from 'work' to 'help' make helping out sound more enjoyable.
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Answer:

A.

The paragraph is more persuasive to the reader.

correct answer

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