Question

I'm doing essay about sumthin like this who thinks its good

Everyone goes through some things but people bullys I should say push people and when these people are already down and it sends them to wanting to kill themselves or depression and all kinds of things.people everyone should be nice and say nice things to people. Like everyone out there bullys non bullys are special and nice an all beautiful. so every one be happy becuase don't listen to bullys they are just rude people listen to good people who think your cute or nice or sweet and we need to stop bullying it is not helping no one.

HOW THIS SOUND FOR A STOP BULLYING ESSAY

Answer 1

i wouldnt say people comit suid suide because of buillying but other than that its great good start

Answer 2

Amazing but maybe add something like " if you're being bullied the person/people bullying you are most likely jealous of you or they are having a tough time themselves "