Question

Can somebody help me with my thesis statement? I have a general idea of what I want to talk about it but I'm afraid it's not coming together as I hoped.

Answer 1

You have to make sure it is very descriptive, and need to use synonyms for small words. For example if you say: "He is Nice", Instead you can say, "He is generous", rather than using small words.

Answer 2

Ok what is it that you're having problems with? All your thesis statement needs is the topic you are going to write about and the 3 reasons or facts to support your claim