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Which solution does NOT correctly fix the following run-on sentence?

Jim had not yet seen his beautiful present she held it out to him eagerly upon her open palm.

A. Jim had not yet seen his beautiful present. She held it out to him eagerly upon her open palm.
B. Jim had not yet seen his beautiful present, she held it out to him eagerly upon her open palm.
C. Jim had not yet seen his beautiful present, so she held it out to him eagerly upon her open palm.

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b!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im pretty sure it's b
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