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Read the passage. (1) During my walk through the woods to the hidden garden, I encountered many beautiful sights. (2) Sunlight filtered down through the trees. (3) Suddenly, I grew hungry. (4) Branches thick with leaves gently swayed in the breeze. (5) The branches parted to reveal a bird’s nest here, a squirrel’s nest there. (6) Far below, on the secret path, bright patches of sunlight wavered on the smooth stones. Which revision most effectively unifies the passage? adding a topic sentence eliminating sentence 3 elaborating about the weather combining sentences 3 and 4

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THE ANSWER IS: B( eliminating sentence 3

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Eliminating sentence 3, because it doesn't go with the passage
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