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Hiking along the trail, the Grand Canyon came into view.

The Grand Canyon came into view as I was hiking along the trail.
Walking toward the car, I could see that I had a flat tire.
I could see that I had a flat tire walking toward the car.


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Hiking along the trail, the Grand Canyon came into view.
I could see that I had a flat tire walking toward the car

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