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(1) I have talked to twelve of my fellow students who are also interested in forming a photography club. (2) Also, Ms. Gonzales told me that she might want to help out.

Which is the best revision of sentence 2?

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Answer: It’s D In addition , ms Gonzales has expressed interest in being our advisor

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Given that we already had the idea of what Ms. Gonzales wanted to help out with, we may construct sentence 2 as follows:

Ms. Gonzales told me that she might want to help me out with talking to my twelve fellow students in forming a photography club.
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