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Can someone please look over my essay and edit it for me I keep getting a 36 no matter how many times I edit it

A farewell to arms is a reflective novel, it lets us see the life of someone who was in the war at this time. Fredric henry was an ambulance driver in the Italian army. Henry falls in love with a nurse that he met and wants to be with her but she doesn't want to be with him, henry soon gets injured and doesn't want to be participating in the Italian army anymore after being sent back to the front for drinking alcohol while in the hospital Henry decides he wants to leave and live a happy life with his woman away from the hurt and death, Henry leaves the army on a close call just barely making it out, that makes him seen as a criminal and a traitor to his homeland, Henry is happy that he has left but he feels guilty for leaving and is now being seen as something he is not. Catherine later passes away from childbirth the baby was still born sadly. This story is important for other people to understand because no matter what you choose in life there will always be an issue with the choices you make you just have to choose what makes you feel the happiest, but all and all you may have bigger problems with the choice you pick than what you had before you made the decision.
I can relate to this story because my mother kicked me out of her house which I wanted to happen so I could live with my dad but she didn't let me take my cat and I miss him terribly she also has turned the whole family against me by saying stuff that's just not true. This story is extremely good at showing us that impulsiveness can cause more problems than what you had before.

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Answer: A farewell to arms is a reflective novel, it lets us see the life of someone who was in the war at this time. Fredric henry was an ambulance driver in the Italian army. Henry falls in love with a nurse that he met and wants to be with her but she doesn't want to be with him, henry soon gets injured and doesn't want to be participating in the Italian army anymore after being sent back to the front for drinking alcohol while in the hospital Henry decides he wants to leave and live a happy life with his woman away from the hurt and death, Henry leaves the army on a close call just barely making it out, that makes him seen as a criminal and a traitor to his homeland, Henry is happy that he has left but he feels guilty for leaving and is now being seen as something he is not. Catherine later passes away from childbirth the baby was stillborn sadly. This story is important for other people to understand because no matter what you choose in life there will always be an issue with the choices you make you just have to choose what makes you feel the happiest, but all and all you may have bigger problems with the choice you pick than what you had before you made the decision.

I can relate to this story because my mother kicked me out of her house which I wanted to happen so I could live with my dad but she didn't let me take my cat and I miss him she also has turned the whole family against me by saying stuff that's just not true. This story is extremely good at showing us that impulsiveness can cause more problems than what you had before.

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