Question

PLEASE TELL ME FEEDBACK, THATS ALL I WANT.

First and foremost, I believe that homework is not beneficial for students because it causes stress. To start, stress usually occurs in homework when there are excessive amounts of it. According to ''Students Need Less Homework'' states, '' When an overwhelming amount of homework is given out to students, it becomes less beneficial for them.'' The same text goes on by stating that when a student receives excessive amounts of homework and does not know what they are doing, it can be extremely overwhelming. Excessive amounts of homework is a major problem in schools that make students become stressed. Another example of how homework causes stress for students is by leading them to failure. In the text ''Students Need Less Homework'' shows that when a student is assigned a difficult task, the feelings of failure and shame spreads all over their mind. Students normally view difficult homework as a cause of failure which leads them to be stressed. The feelings of failure toward homework can severely harm a students' mental abilities. Homework is not beneficial since it gives off stress to students.


Please tell me feedback on how I did. Prompt is choose a side whether or not homework is beneficial for students. I chose that it is not.


I- No


R1-Stress A. Excessive amounts B. Failure


I had not start others, I am still on my first paragraph. I just want to know how I did. Argumentative writing.

Answer 1

You did it good but you can write it better after reading an article on Internet and getting a gist of it, there are still many points you can cover and also starting and ending of a paragraph should be more focused.