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I have to write a monologue, a friend of mine helped me but I was wondering, what should I add and where?

Here's what I have so far:

If it’s not love I wouldn’t be writing this, love is something I feel, something I got, I see it every day, my heart wouldn’t leave love because my heart is that love, and that heart is my Joey Sosoka every time I sleep my heart keep thinking of his love, every time I wake up my heart live with his love, a good friend once said “The love of months and years stays in mind, but the love of days stays and hides” In this life we meet people and when they stay in our life forever they stay in the in the mind but some of them stay for couple of days and leave, it’s all about responsibilities I’m sure that everyone in this world can get responsible enough and take his girl into his eyes and be proud of her.

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Maybe add something about how long you want this last toward the end.
If you need an example let me know in the comments, I hope that helped and everything turns out for the best
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and in there love would be so sure
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