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What would be the topic sentence? "First of all, being alive and healthy is key to a persons happiness. For example, my friends mom, a poor woman, went through this situation a few years ago." Which one of the two sentences is the topic sentence? Or is it both? Help

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I would go with the first of all because it sounds a lot more professional than the other one with the other sentence I would use as an actual example in a body paragraph later on
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Your topic sentence would be "First of all, being alive and healthy is key to a persons happiness."
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